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    dots Submission Name: Bipolar Conversations dots
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    Author: childoftears
    ASL Info:    20/female/CV Arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    1.02 - 3/24/39
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotsBipolar Conversations dots
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    I HATE MYSELF!
    I HATE MYSELF!
    Screaming voices surround her head.

    I HATE MYSELF!
    I HATE MYSELF!
    She feels so helpless so useless wishing
    she were dead.

    JUST FUCKING DO IT!
    DO IT!YOU FUCKING LOSER!
    Shes shaky as as she puts the the noose
    around her neck
    Crying,scared she throws it off
    Jumps down hits the deck.

    YOUR WORTHLESS!
    THERES NO POINT FOR YOU TO LIVE!
    She doesnt know what else to do?
    all she can do is deal with this lonely
    sad depressed life so scary to see,
    This fucked up Bipolar
    angry,regretful girl is.....me.




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