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    dots Submission Name: Never want to lose youdots
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    Author: childoftears
    ASL Info:    20/female/CV Arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    1.02 - 3/24/39
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 811
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    Description:
       About a friend i whole dear and near to my heart but its very much more then that like spirit soul mates or something. :)


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    dotsNever want to lose youdots
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    Into his eyes I stare
    To afraid to speak my true feelings,I wouldnt dare
    His soul such beauty I seek within
    But to ruin our friendship would b a sin.

    To lose him would drive me insane
    Like shoving a knife straight through the heart,the unbearable
    Pain.
    Hes my best friend,hes like my guardian
    Hes sweet,so lovable this amazing being not like the rest of
    them.

    Hes shown me a new way of living
    But so hard when I look at him,Im mesmerized like that
    annoying song you cant avoid with that up beat kind of
    thing.

    Cant describe how I feel when were together
    Its like the whole world around us disappears
    Hes the only one who truly understands me
    the only one that listens the only on that hears.

    But my feelings I must hide
    to keep him by my side.




    Submitted on 2014-11-10 16:57:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    A familiar story that all of us know all too well. I think if you structured this a little better and reworded some lines to keep syllables closer together youd have am amazing piece. Almost reads like most of the ones I write. Keep it up
    | Posted on 2014-11-13 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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