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    dots Submission Name: Row shall Idots
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    Author: keestu
    ASL Info:    32/male/Sydney
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 153/95/116
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       To A____e
    Row I will if you let me...


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    dotsRow shall Idots
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    Row till the sails hit the sun, down beneath the shore of sadness lies a pearl to be saved.
    Row to the pearl of happiness for I shall sail the world to wipe that tear on her face.

    Rowed till the pearl who my dear, cried with her heart soaked in the sea with a wound.
    Rowed till the pearl who bled for a day and i made her bleed more with my words.
    Rowed to the shore did I with her in my mind and my heart, who held to lose me again.

    Row shall I with my pearl, with my tear, with my heart, with my fear of her who might wash away.

    For I shall row forever with my pearl in my dreams and in my days.
    For I shall row till my breath in the seas with God in thy grace.

    Row with me in my sail...is all I ask...




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