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    dots Submission Name: sex objectdots
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    Author: aftertheflesh
    Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 76/113/48
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 330
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    dotssex objectdots
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    reaching for you
    as you walk out the door
    begging that you stay
    you kiss me goodbye
    and don't return until the night
    runs into the day
    you knock on my door
    walk in and undress
    look at me and and
    fall to the floor
    taking off my pants
    is that all that you want
    just another go
    just another moment of pleasure
    before you leave again
    is that all i am
    just a piece of meat
    that you take in
    when you're in heat
    i may be a man
    but i have more
    substance than that
    you take me to the bed
    climb on top
    ride the waves
    until the motion stops
    you can't look me in the eyes
    you just want to go down
    then you leave and
    don't say a word
    the cycle begins again
    and the world turns




    Submitted on 2004-08-05 13:05:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yes, that has to be hard. I hate it when men treat women as sex objects, and I hate the converse too. Anyway, this makes a great point.
    | Posted on 2004-08-05 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      torn between sex and a meaningful relationshipbut like theoffspring says i know i'm being used but that's ok because i like the abuse right that's why u take it
    | Posted on 2004-08-05 00:00:00 | by stickman | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah women are shalow creatures with very few meaningfull emotions. but so are guys. at the end of the day we are animals and our instinks tell us to [censored] like crazy and have loads of kids. damn the shalowness of society.

    good poem dude. you really got across how you were being used as a [censored] machine. i hope you have ditched the [censored]. peace out
    | Posted on 2004-08-05 00:00:00 | by nameless_nobody | [ Reply to This ]



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