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    dots Submission Name: believedots
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    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsbelievedots
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    Die
    like a cocoon of butterflies
    with unpainted wings
    sorrow
    is life not taken
    when love is the death we owe ourselves

    Live
    like a thousand colors
    with blind eyes
    joy
    is kindness given
    when life is simply the reason to live

    each birth would be a flower
    it's gentleness will go wild in a nook
    the one we neglects is the most beautiful
    as if the world cannot see
    or is rooted to a being
    one which grows its own soul.




    Submitted on 2014-11-19 07:57:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I so totally agree of enigma's entity armed identity crisis "One which grows it's own soul".

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2014-11-19 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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