I think this is one of the best explorations of life (and pregnancy) I have read.
Stylistically the absence of punctuation works so well here creating pause, allowing you to transition from one subject so that the next time the poem settles -where it settles it is the next new thing
and so on.
This is really great (admirable)
when you think about the subject matter and phrasings expressed, which btw were a gorgeousness, really impressed.
On the poem: this is life
and that's such a rare thing -to get it down on paper.