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    dots Submission Name: I'm FINEdots
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    Author: Jessa
    ASL Info:    29/f/pa
    Elite Ratio:    3.73 - 221/209/73
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       working with disability...not easy but better than being worthless I guess.


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    dotsI'm FINEdots
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    I hate being disabled.
    I can deny it most days
    but her vengeance is swift
    when she feels ignored
    or neglected.
    The pain will be great
    as it always is.
    One day
    she will make the phrase
    “quality of life”
    into a low-budget
    comedy tragedy.




    Submitted on 2014-12-04 14:22:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Jessa:

    Hidden beneath sunny skies
    she waits patiently
    for inattention
    knife carrying disease
    inflicting agony
    before creeping away slowly
    dancing with wieldy swords
    holding rapt attention
    like an amusement park sideshow
    I laugh
    in the face of her histrionics.

    Never let the Dis out-weigh the Ability. Hoping your pain-free today!
    | Posted on 2014-12-19 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      as throbbing joints play cryptic notes
    about mercy's still and fickle glimpse
    of solidarity and health
    I creak like bridges built for those
    full of faith and days and wealth...

    Just my thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2014-12-07 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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