Always and Never -------------------------------------------
Fearless anger, careless swears
Overly used to make a difference
Dodges, damages, daggers and dears
Under the feet of fallen souls
Life was like chasing a shattered idol
Repeatedly smeared winner concepts
Life was a mundane to your godly human
The loft that birthed always and never
Died again a human forever
Had died again in a cynical blink
A promise broken down to the clay
A never that ended just in a day
Mortality defined by death again
Was more than we could say.
Please do yourself a huge favor right now: remove the 'like' before 'chasing a shattered idol.' Ahhhh. That's better, isn't it? The rhythm is good, there's deliberation in the words that gives them some weight. Excellent.
Submission Name: Always and Never
