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    dots Submission Name: Roleplaydots
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    Author: Iram
    ASL Info:    25/F/from your world
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 50/62/55
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRoleplaydots
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    Inspired by your momentary imprisonment
    You willingly harness your whole quay
    Toast to the trust in the illusions of joy
    Applauding your virtual independence day
    Happiness is like a roleplay you play
    By your words spoken, written or felt
    Re-created yourself from philosophies
    And language that discusses blood
    How can you believe your noisy dreams
    Where your eyes sleep and you cannot
    Spinning with the globe of quotes and speech
    Where reality never speaks.




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