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    dots Submission Name: After the flightdots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/122
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 843
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    Description:
       I printed this out justified left and right.... One long skinny block of print. Then I printed it out and cut it into a bookmark. It looks better but i don't know how to format it that way, here.


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    dotsAfter the flightdots
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    After the flight

    This poem is also a book
    mark, just in case you don't
    like poems, or this one any
    way, and you need a scrap
    of paper to mark the spot
    where you last read, or fell
    asleep reading, a book about
    someone whose life is more
    interesting or fun than your
    own. Not that your life isn't
    great, mind you. Who can
    complain, after all, when you've
    got the famous dream tucked
    right into your sock? We've all
    got problems and you're no
    different than the rest of us.
    We, too, have to eat; we all love
    money and we all need love.
    A warm place to pillow our
    softening heads. A little music
    or a good bedtime story. We just
    need a way to find our way back
    to the place where we left off.




    Submitted on 2014-12-09 21:46:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A warm place to pillow our
    softening heads. A little music
    or a good bedtime story. We just
    need a way to find our way back
    to the place where we left off.


    we never left. our eyes abhorred
    the tongues of giggling liars cleft
    like pitchforks cast before the Lord
    tell my little ones to sleep
    in the crooks of quiet arms
    before the gallows bell is rung
    by a devil in the dark...

    Just some thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2014-12-12 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      cool idea. Kudos on that. is this after a literal flight? or like after the experience(whatever that may be) more so.
    | Posted on 2014-12-10 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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