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    dots Submission Name: How could I resist? dots
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    Author: HolyChaos
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    dotsHow could I resist? dots
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    Ive spent all my life
    guarding my heart
    keeping everyone out,
    but you knocked so kindly
    and waited so patiently...

    yet all the while i saw the way
    your eyes burned for me
    with the gentlest kind of violence
    ive ever seen.

    How could i resist
    such selflessness?




    Submitted on 2014-12-11 12:59:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "the gentlest kind of violence", how very unique. Nice work here.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2014-12-23 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      I like.this alot. It reminds me.of.my own work. The twist was great. I fell into the kindness and gentleness you were drawing in to and then blam. Really like the line with the gentles kind of violence.

    Great job
    | Posted on 2014-12-13 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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