Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: How could I resist? dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: HolyChaos
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/2/1
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 779
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 346



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHow could I resist? dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Ive spent all my life
    guarding my heart
    keeping everyone out,
    but you knocked so kindly
    and waited so patiently...

    yet all the while i saw the way
    your eyes burned for me
    with the gentlest kind of violence
    ive ever seen.

    How could i resist
    such selflessness?




    Submitted on 2014-12-11 12:59:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      "the gentlest kind of violence", how very unique. Nice work here.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2014-12-23 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      I like.this alot. It reminds me.of.my own work. The twist was great. I fell into the kindness and gentleness you were drawing in to and then blam. Really like the line with the gentles kind of violence.

    Great job
    | Posted on 2014-12-13 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Keep written by TheStillSilence
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow
    Dream written by closetpoet
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    untitled written by Outlaw
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    FamiliarDemons ©™ written by kyserin
    A Sense Of Things written by Daniel Barlow
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    The World written by jjd
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Mystery Read written by kyserin
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    New users can only get up to two comments without commenting.