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    dots Submission Name: Pilgrimagedots
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    Author: D-Ink
    Elite Ratio:    1.38 - 81/59/58
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Prose/Religious
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    dotsPilgrimagedots
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    I wish you all the best.
    In your adventure, your journey
    to the widest ends, the hottest plains,
    and unpredictable climate.
    I wish you all the joy.
    In fulfilling your innermost desire,
    To scale, to roam, to uplift,
    The places you've been longing for.
    I wish you success,
    In declaring your faith,
    Through the thorns and pains,
    Of what this life has got to offer.
    And many more, and not forgetting,
    The pleasure, joy and contentment,
    Of once you reach your final abode,
    To your Maker,
    Which made this leap of faith,
    Worth taking for.




    Submitted on 2014-12-12 09:18:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      We are all just pilgrims, nomads, journeymen of different circumstances!
    The religious undertones are noticeable, but not in a bad way.
    I believe faith can be found in many other aspects, however!

    Overall an interesting piece, and I wish you the best too my fellow pilgrim. Haha.

    ~Vincent
    | Posted on 2015-01-01 00:00:00 | by Vismare | [ Reply to This ]
      Strange to say the least, but it hold ones attention to the end, well done.
    | Posted on 2014-12-18 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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