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    dots Submission Name: The boogie mandots

    Author: D-Ink
    Elite Ratio:    1.38 - 81/59/58
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dotsThe boogie mandots

    There is always someone
    Hiding in the cupboard.
    Crouching, silently, patiently
    Waiting to launch its surprise
    On the poor unexpected victim.

    There is always a boogie man
    In one's cupboard.
    Don't let it out
    Instead guard it, lock it,
    Surprise it with your own wits.

    You'll never know,
    It might get bored and restless
    And wither to nothingness on its own!

    Submitted on 2014-12-12 09:21:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ha! Boogie men rarely wither to nothingess on their own. Exposure therapy is the best thing for those f***ers. :)
    | Posted on 2014-12-27 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ]
      There is always someone
    hid in the damn cupboard
    crouching silently inpatient.

    Waiting to lurch their surprise
    on the poor unexpected victim
    for there's always a boogie man.

    In one's cupboard do not let out
    instead you guard it, lock it away
    surprise with wits your own love.

    You'll never know and never tell
    you might get bored or restless
    wither in nothingness the end!
    | Posted on 2014-12-12 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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