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    dots Submission Name: My Prayerdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsMy Prayerdots
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    You are the guiding light
    and you move my heart

    When I walk away and my mind is stirred by what I see, you are there in the ripples of the water
    asking me to do something more
    yearning for a connection beyond compassion

    So many times I could not follow you
    Lost in the wilderness of my imagination
    Blinded by the thorns that cast out my care
    Frozen by the cold that hardens me
    as I cling to my own comfort

    If I were stronger I say to you
    And yet you are my strength
    If I were braver
    And yet my courage is defined by you
    If I were more beautiful
    You are the mystery that has created every thing
    And in doubting me I doubt you

    Forgive me while I find my peace
    I am forgiven
    Be patient with me while I get my nerve
    You are Faithful

    Thank You
    For being perfectly what I need





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      This piece perfectly explains the errors of us as people because and its in our nature and it goes to show that no matter how much we may try we can't do anything on our own. Most people fail to realize that no matter how much you go thru there is always help when you set your eyes to beyond the skys limit
    | Posted on 2015-01-02 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]
      It always amazes me how satisfied people can be by their religious conceptions. My pantheistic endeavors often appease my mind, concepts that seem almost universally applicable. Conversely they don't bring complete satisfaction. Perhaps this is created by the physical paradox aimed spiritualism in that I don't seem to embody these seemingly eternal spiritual relativities. I can easily see how they could hold true yet I am but a corporeally finite. I wonder if you could explain to me how this could mean more to your survival instincts than animal. I guess these spiritual relations just seem to fill the bill. Although, intellectually I can understand, emotionally I don't seem to relate. There's just too much bad in the world for me to feel this way.
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    Bruce
    | Posted on 2014-12-20 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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