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    dots Submission Name: No luck, no lovedots
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    Author: D-Ink
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    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsNo luck, no lovedots
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    They told me,
    I would get married by 30.
    They told me,
    Life's gonna get excitin'
    and lovely, pretty.

    I believed them, then.
    For deep in my heart,
    I yearn for a man,
    That only death can
    do us apart.

    So, like a good child,
    I waited, and waited.
    He's a bit late, I don't mind,
    Told myself, its fated.

    Years passed,
    Seasons changed.
    And past 30,
    I've aged.

    Never again to believe,
    I swore.
    To all those who wished me luck,
    Ask yourself again,
    Why am I in this muck?




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