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    dots Submission Name: Who Suffers More?dots
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    Author: zadhoevlhu13
    ASL Info:    18/f/phil
    Elite Ratio:    4.48 - 97/94/25
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWho Suffers More?dots
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    Miles and miles apart,
    Of seas, mountains, and fields
    So far away, she couldn't hear a laugh
    So long gone, missing more her smile,

    Thoughts and thoughts adrift,
    Of anger, sadness, and pride
    So close to call, still he dare not to ring
    So short of time, she did not care to talk,

    Hearts sticking together, hundred lands across,
    Or sitting next each other, yet eyes won't meet,
    A fairly shared misfortune, the ironies of fate,
    Lovers from a distance, but who suffers more?





    Submitted on 2014-12-28 14:46:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Words like this will forever echo throughout time. Some of us will understand, but precious few will know and understand...

    ...thank you for sharing...

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    | Posted on 2015-04-22 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]
      The classics remain the most touching, since there is likely not one of us for whom this circumstance, so eloquently captured, is not all too familiar.
    | Posted on 2014-12-28 00:00:00 | by Ontlogicalamity | [ Reply to This ]


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