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untimely demise


Author: CrypticBard
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untimely demise



At the door, random severance:
Like a telemarketer on steroids,
This quasi-divine contrivance
Not any substance or fleeing could quell:
Here we dance, zomboid grievance,
Mere mortals could not work around.




Submitted on 2014-12-28 19:48:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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