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    dots Submission Name: untimely demisedots
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    Author: CrypticBard
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    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Lostfriend
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    At the door, random severance:
    Like a telemarketer on steroids,
    This quasi-divine contrivance
    Not any substance or fleeing could quell:
    Here we dance, zomboid grievance,
    Mere mortals could not work around.




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