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    dots Submission Name: Teeth sagadots
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    Author: D-Ink
    Elite Ratio:    1.38 - 81/59/58
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsTeeth sagadots
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    Argh! Bleargh! Ugh!
    I gritted my teeth
    and counted sheeps
    I want to sleep
    and visit neverending dreams.
    Aarrhhh!! Shucks!! Man!!
    This pain is driving me mad!
    Damn!
    Just throw me to the land
    of the dead!
    Enough already!
    You little twirt!
    I'll bet you a dime,
    You're gonna die,
    In a matter of time,
    In the hands of a guy,
    Who takes teeth out
    As his job day and night.
    In that time,
    You'll realise,
    Your existence was never
    meant to be.
    So be gone,
    Go with the wind,
    And never come back
    to haunt me in my
    dreams and reality.




    Submitted on 2014-12-28 21:32:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      On the count of one, two, three you make up and?
    | Posted on 2014-12-30 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      An interesting solution, instead of just biting him you choose to pull his teeth. Ha ha ha ha ! I can get it to that
    | Posted on 2014-12-29 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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