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    dots Submission Name: The Kelpie or the Clydesdale dots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe Kelpie or the Clydesdale dots
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    The Kelpie or the Clydesdale

    The bold speak of dreams with reverence;
    with passion in something we cannot believe.
    Arrogance fans the flames---consuming all,
    into a silhouette slowly fading;
    society slowly failing---a flight of fancy into nevermore.

    The silent breathe deep with solace;
    with hope in something we cannot see.
    Galloping into the depths---drowning all,
    into a silhouette softly weeping;
    innocence softly dying---a flight of fancy into nevermore.




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      The intelligent speak of identity with realism;
    with belief in something we can see.
    Rectifying futurities fatidic---saving all,
    with a silhouette vehemently screaming;
    ignorance swiftly fading---a flight of fancy into evermore

    Bruce

    PS: I'll take a mustang any day.
    | Posted on 2014-12-29 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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