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    dots Submission Name: The City Growsdots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 29/50/47
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe City Growsdots
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    There is not enough.
    The world is small
    A concept long discussed, recognized.
    Every day the distance shrinks
    In our minds if not in miles
    The knot tightens

    The city grows
    And the fields fall away
    to long roads that
    in their turn will fall as well
    or rise, rise as the cities rise

    Climbing like iron vines
    Fed by a synthetic majesty

    The city grows
    As children fall asleep
    to the sound of the electric orchestra;
    The Hum, the heartbeat of the multitudes
    The soul of Mankind's ambition
    And all the world knows

    The City Grows
    Concrete and asphalt
    And metal and glass
    Homes for the modern man
    hives like ants, minds like ants
    Drones are the modern man




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