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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 29/50/47
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Gravity kills
    without remorse
    like emotion
    or tradition




    Submitted on 2014-12-30 01:46:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A physical death is quite emotionless in the sense of its permanent consistency. The expression of that with gravity was well portrayed and yes, to the point.
    | Posted on 2015-07-06 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Straight and to the point, but open to interpretation in the sense of what gravity may be. Vague, but just enough to delve past its surface. Well done!
    | Posted on 2014-12-30 00:00:00 | by Vismare | [ Reply to This ]


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