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    dots Submission Name: The Crowdots
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    Author: Vismare
    Elite Ratio:    4.84 - 19/16/9
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    Description:
       Just a poem I've written loosely based off of sonnet style poetry.


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    dotsThe Crowdots
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    The brisk breeze blows
    Inarticulate, but heard.
    Buffets the air, and flows
    Coasting the wind, a bird.

    The sky, the clouds, a crow.
    An open world to venture,
    Too high, yet too low,
    Serving nature's indenture.

    A pact of which to follow
    But free to roam around,
    A life lived to wallow,
    But restricted and bound.

    The predator or prey,
    Which grounds this pact strongly
    Decides the crow's fate to lay
    Dead, deceased, wrongly.

    The nature of nature
    And the world that persists
    By it's nomenclature
    Yields nothing resists.

    The brisk breeze blows and lightly insists,
    That nothing but wind will ever exist.




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      This was great! Reminds me of my
    Older stuff ill be checking out more of your work!
    | Posted on 2016-06-06 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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