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White Rose, Red


Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 64
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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White Rose, Red



Take my white rose
White rose, red
Love everlasting
Even when dead
Kiss my white rose
White rose, red
In which love flows
In what is said
Cry on my white rose
White rose, red
Always there to be with you
And comfort you when sad
Love my white rose
White rose, red
Loving you with the symbol
White rose...
Stained blood red...




Submitted on 2014-12-30 22:03:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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