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    dots Submission Name: White Rose, Reddots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsWhite Rose, Reddots
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    Take my white rose
    White rose, red
    Love everlasting
    Even when dead
    Kiss my white rose
    White rose, red
    In which love flows
    In what is said
    Cry on my white rose
    White rose, red
    Always there to be with you
    And comfort you when sad
    Love my white rose
    White rose, red
    Loving you with the symbol
    White rose...
    Stained blood red...




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