Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: White Rose, Reddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 788
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 437



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsWhite Rose, Reddots
    -------------------------------------------


    Take my white rose
    White rose, red
    Love everlasting
    Even when dead
    Kiss my white rose
    White rose, red
    In which love flows
    In what is said
    Cry on my white rose
    White rose, red
    Always there to be with you
    And comfort you when sad
    Love my white rose
    White rose, red
    Loving you with the symbol
    White rose...
    Stained blood red...




    Submitted on 2014-12-30 22:03:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    199781

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Summer written by layDsayD
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    untitled written by ShyOne
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Carry written by saartha
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Love written by saartha
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    AI written by poetotoe
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Push written by JanePlane
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry