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Moonlight Lullaby


Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 50
Class/Type: Poetry /Nature
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Moonlight Lullaby



Late at night
When the moon is high
The wolf will make
Its' eerie cry
Echoing in the valleys deep
And in the mountains so steep
Then they travel
Far and wide
To hear that soothing lullaby
They do not stop
Once at all
Until they find
That lovely song...




Submitted on 2014-12-30 22:20:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It brings to mind a lone woof seeking more of its kind... and also of a lone writer posting up his/her work to seek someone with similar thoughts and views. Maybe I am over thinking it but its beautiful :)
| Posted on 2015-01-06 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]
  This was sweet. Great job too
| Posted on 2015-01-01 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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