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    dots Submission Name: Moonlight Lullabydots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210/104/71
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 1158
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    dotsMoonlight Lullabydots
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    Late at night
    When the moon is high
    The wolf will make
    Its' eerie cry
    Echoing in the valleys deep
    And in the mountains so steep
    Then they travel
    Far and wide
    To hear that soothing lullaby
    They do not stop
    Once at all
    Until they find
    That lovely song...




    Submitted on 2014-12-30 22:20:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It brings to mind a lone woof seeking more of its kind... and also of a lone writer posting up his/her work to seek someone with similar thoughts and views. Maybe I am over thinking it but its beautiful :)
    | Posted on 2015-01-06 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]
      This was sweet. Great job too
    | Posted on 2015-01-01 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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