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    dots Submission Name: Useless Preydots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5/120/134
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsUseless Preydots
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    Go ahead.
    Hide in the dark.
    That's were us predators stay hidden to catch you.
    Please.
    Stay in a pack.
    Allows us to strike fear in all of you.
    I beg you.
    Fight back.
    I prefer to play with my food first anyways.




    Submitted on 2014-12-31 00:49:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Eek.
    Fear indeed spreads among many uncertain minds rather than one keeping its demised thoughts to itself.
    Very imaginative in regards to just what exactly the villain/predator is.
    You say "Allows US to strike fear..."
    If you were a pack, and I a predator, I could state the same towards you!!!

    Well written!
    | Posted on 2015-01-01 00:00:00 | by Vismare | [ Reply to This ]
      Wouldn't be referring to how you toy with me, would you? If not, PM ME! I wanna know!
    | Posted on 2014-12-31 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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