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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/121
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPerformance Reviewdots
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    Performance Review
            (a pep talk)

    So far, you've had a stellar year 
    Not what I expected
    You're a real standout 
    A giant among men
    and a god among giants
    Outstanding in your field
    Big fish in a big pond. 
    A champion, a real winner
    Johnny on the spot, jack
    of all trades. Master of your
    Domain.  Women want you
    Men want to be you
    Now walk away 
    from the mirror 
    Get out there and see
    what January 2nd brings.  




    Submitted on 2014-12-31 09:40:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ah how my ego gets away with me when at the mirror. How I wish I could actually change the world.
    | Posted on 2014-12-31 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      Hah! After that, it had better be a raise.
    | Posted on 2014-12-31 00:00:00 | by Ontlogicalamity | [ Reply to This ]


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