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    dots Submission Name: Long Distance Thingdots

    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/121
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLong Distance Thingdots

    Long Distance Thing

    On a scale of one to exceptional
    I'd say you're incredible, 
    which is very commendable!
    I'm not easily impressible, 
    but I find I'm susceptible 
    to your charms unforgettable,
    sublime, and delectable.
    Although you're inaccessible 
    in ways three-dimensional.  
    I think that it's mentionable
    I'm a little obsessional
    with your messages textual.
    And though it's not practical, 
    or even real sensible, 
    this idea's recommendable:
    let's be connectable.

    Submitted on 2014-12-31 09:41:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ah, this was great!
    | Posted on 2015-01-06 00:00:00 | by Vismare | [ Reply to This ]
      Here's to the futurity fatidic in élan vital. We'll share the majesty in evolutional principle.
    | Posted on 2014-12-31 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      Having been in several long-distance relationships, I find a warm familiarity with the subject of your reflection. It's interesting to consider, though, how people managed to be happy before modern telecommunications. They were generally forced to settle for a relationship with someone in their immediate locale, whereas we literally can pick and choose from the entire population of the connected world. I wonder if that makes our lived easier or more difficult?
    | Posted on 2014-12-31 00:00:00 | by Ontlogicalamity | [ Reply to This ]

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