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    dots Submission Name: Rainbowdots
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    Author: D-Ink
    Elite Ratio:    1.38 - 81/59/58
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsRainbowdots
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    When I look up to the sky,
    I see a rainbow peeking through.

    It's strange, I almost thought of you.
    Beautiful and amazing in all its hues. (just like you)

    I tried to touch it,
    To soak in and feel its splendour.

    I sighed,
    First quietly. Then loudly.

    And made a wish,
    For you to come around.

    For looking up to a rainbow,
    Reminds me so much of you.

    Cause in this heart,
    Carved in a special place,
    A rainbow that represents you,
    Resides deeply inside me,
    Waiting for its right time to burst through.




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