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    dots Submission Name: A Good Fightdots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/122
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA Good Fightdots
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    A Good Fight
    (after Roger McGough)

    I like a good fight
    one with lots of poetry
    in it. Tears, and the
    tossing of chairs. Fights

    about past lovers are good,
    and fights that insult
    the in-laws and bring up impotence.
    I don't like fights that

    don't break anything.
    Spats are lukewarm and
    a waste of words.
    Also fights that don't

    know how to finish someone off.
    If I was a fight
    I'd pack my shit and
    pitch you the bird on my way out.




    Submitted on 2015-01-03 01:50:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I thought this was a very nice read!
    I really enjoyed the first stanza and interpreted it that how, in the creation of poetry, it can be hard or easy, and must involve emotion (tears), and most certainly involves frustration (tossing of chairs) at points!
    And impotence is a low blow, literally! Haha.
    I agree through the rest of the piece, for all fights must be intended to fight well and must have the grandeur in its conclusion!!!

    Well done!

    ~Vincent
    | Posted on 2015-01-04 00:00:00 | by Vismare | [ Reply to This ]
      As a martial artist I have a slightly different attitude about fighting. With us it's supposed to be a last resort. Conversely, if you had ever read my post 'Anger Issues' you'd know I have a lot of empathy for your attitude problems. I really like this piece of yours. I love a woman who will stand up for how she feels. It's so much better than bottling it up inside. How are you ever going to achieve resolution if you don't throw a few punches, break a few chairs. Positively hostile woman, I just love it. Ha ha ha ha ha. Seriously, I almost fell out of my chair. Thanks!

    Bruce

    PS: I looked up Roger McGough and I'm wondering what the blue meanies does he have to do with this piece???
    | Posted on 2015-01-03 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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