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    dots Submission Name: Preparing for Battledots
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    Author: riverrei
    ASL Info:    25/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 64/34/61
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    dotsPreparing for Battledots
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    Though, in time we must make haste,
    let not our hearts be trouble -
    nor our minds be lost.
    Only faith can help us now.

    Through dangers untold,
    and hardships unnumbered,
    we have fought to gain our ground.
    Let it not be easily taken,
    for the battle was not easily won,

    We charge ahead, to the gates of hell,
    though heaven is always sweeter.
    To break the curse around us,
    all comfort is left behind us.




    Submitted on 2015-01-04 11:31:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your altruistic attitude and egalitarian leanings are appreciated. Of we leave comfort behind and live for the fight indeed. The highway to hell can be a comfort to those worth their salt who stand up for what they believe!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-01-04 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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