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    Author: riverrei
    ASL Info:    25/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 64/34/61
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Let the inner demon run wild.
    An eruption of anger let it loose.
    Allowing it to wreak its havoc upon all,
    Destruction and chaos its only goal.

    Outcomes good and bad arise.
    The good – the demon’s host cleansed of hatred.
    The bad – witnesses scorned undeservedly.
    Unrelentingly, the consequences plague the host.

    None of it should have happened.
    The hate too much to hold inside.
    Hence, the demon was born,
    to embrace what the host would not.




    Submitted on 2015-01-04 15:12:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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