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The Journey

Author: riverrei
ASL Info:    25/F/MI
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Words: 166
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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The Journey

As I sit and watch the trees fly by,
I think of you.
Unsure of what to do
with these blissful thoughts of you.

Staring out into the distance
seeing nothing but nature,
the beauty surrounding me,
reminding me of you.

The skies dull and grey,
matching my saddened spirit
yet adding to the beauty
of the trees in the distance.

Passing fields and farms,
the land flying by us.
Leaving nothing in our path,
only the journey up ahead.

Driving closer to the destination
that which the trees hold distant.
Searching for that beauty
that was once mine within.

The nature so close.
The beauty I can almost reach.
Searching for the thing I want most.
The one thing I can’t have.

Within me it calls.
The wind, the trees, all of it.
I can feel it all around me,
filling my heart and soul.

The distance reached.
The beauty within found.
The calling answered.
The journey’s over.

Submitted on 2015-01-04 15:13:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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