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    dots Submission Name: The Journeydots
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    Author: riverrei
    ASL Info:    25/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 64/34/61
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Journeydots
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    As I sit and watch the trees fly by,
    I think of you.
    Unsure of what to do
    with these blissful thoughts of you.

    Staring out into the distance
    seeing nothing but nature,
    the beauty surrounding me,
    reminding me of you.

    The skies dull and grey,
    matching my saddened spirit
    yet adding to the beauty
    of the trees in the distance.

    Passing fields and farms,
    the land flying by us.
    Leaving nothing in our path,
    only the journey up ahead.

    Driving closer to the destination
    that which the trees hold distant.
    Searching for that beauty
    that was once mine within.

    The nature so close.
    The beauty I can almost reach.
    Searching for the thing I want most.
    The one thing I can’t have.

    Within me it calls.
    The wind, the trees, all of it.
    I can feel it all around me,
    filling my heart and soul.

    The distance reached.
    The beauty within found.
    The calling answered.
    The journey’s over.




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