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    dots Submission Name: The Truthdots
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    Author: riverrei
    ASL Info:    25/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 64/34/61
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsThe Truthdots
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    Stab me in the heart.
    Watch me bleed.
    A crimson river,
    dedicated to hiding the truth.

    Hidden deep in my core,
    my entirety lies.
    Only breaking off pieces,
    a show for everyone to enjoy.

    To show off my soul,
    to let down my guard,
    would only teach people the truth.
    No one wants the truth. . .

    I continue to remain a secret,
    let everyone enjoy the show.
    Only ever knowing one side of me;
    how forever I shall be. . .




    Submitted on 2015-01-04 15:20:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "Stab me in the heart.
    Watch me bleed.
    A crimson river,
    dedicated to hiding the truth."

    !!!!!!

    Sorry, I am dumb for words. This is a magnificent imagery. I can see it clearly - someone stabbing in the heart and blood gushes out with such force to keep the foe away from you, so that he will never know your true self and have power over you.

    "To show off my soul,
    to let down my guard,
    would only teach people the truth.
    No one wants the truth. . ."

    I agree most people, not that they do not want the truth, they just cannot handle the truth. They live simpleminded lives and something that is out of the norm is not something they can easily deal with. Unfortunately, I think most of it has to do with how our society works. Everything needs to be perfect. Happy. Healthy. And everything that is not is hidden in institutions that "normal" people do not visit. Mental institutions. Rehabs. Battlefields. So it is easier to hide oneself than to explain endlessly the truth.

    Even though I did not go through what you went through, I believe I can relate to this. And other souls who are hiding themselves.
    | Posted on 2015-01-28 00:00:00 | by wordsofmind | [ Reply to This ]


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