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    dots Submission Name: The Waiting Gamedots

    Author: riverrei
    ASL Info:    25/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 64/34/61
    Words: 275
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsThe Waiting Gamedots

    Classifying and analyzing over and over,
    its like a game that never ends.
    Not watching you like a hawk,
    but paying attention to what you do.
    What you say to me, do around me,
    it all fascinates me, keeping the game going.

    How do you feel?
    What do you think of me?
    Your actions and words fueling the game.
    Sending messages of caring and interesting,
    yet your words remind me you’re taken.
    What is going on?

    I analyze and ponder over and over,
    my mind only rests when I see you.
    I know you’re unattainable to me,
    I don’t mind just being your friend right now,
    but why all the subtext and flirting?
    I don’t want to ruin what you have,
    I just want to know the truth.

    Do you think you could ever in your life,
    be interested in me and my quirks?
    Is that what drives your actions,
    or is it nothing at all?

    I am sick of analyzing,
    I just want to know.
    End this game.
    All I want is the truth.
    I know you’re taken,
    but is it really that hard?

    I promise I won’t invade.
    You know I’m not like that.
    Your friendship is plenty,
    I just hate being so confused.
    These signs give me hints,
    but they aren’t enough,
    I want to be sure.

    All I could ever want,
    is to hear you say it.
    The only thing that will end the game.
    Tell me what you’re hinting at.
    Tell me that you care.

    I’m waiting.
    As long as it takes,
    You know where to find me.
    I’ll always be here.

    Submitted on 2015-01-04 15:23:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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