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    dots Submission Name: Togetherdots
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    Author: riverrei
    ASL Info:    25/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 64/34/61
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1179
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    Distance, time, weather. . .
    All getting in the way of us.
    Getting in the way of our happiness.

    Though time is a foe, it is also a friend.
    For as time races by us,
    the less time until we are together.

    Now, happy we may be
    But not as we truly can.
    How can we stand not knowing. . .

    It’s been so long, yet longer we must wait.
    Hold on my love and stay with me.
    Together we can overcome everything.
    As long as we stay together. . .

    For me, and for us, to stay alive,
    for that to happen, I need you.
    I’m nothing without you. . .

    So stay with me and you shall see,
    how truly happy we both can be.
    Spending out lives together forever,
    the ties between us shall never sever.




    Submitted on 2015-01-04 15:29:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's a very hopeful outlook when you can see past all the hardship and know that you just have to keep working. This is how it is. I really like this poem.
    | Posted on 2015-04-24 00:00:00 | by tomeliot | [ Reply to This ]


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