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    dots Submission Name: Truth and Lovedots
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    Author: riverrei
    ASL Info:    25/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 64/34/61
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsTruth and Lovedots
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    We spend our lives searching for love,
    hoping that one true love can save us from all our problems.
    Blinded by the lie created by society,
    we inevitably block out the truth:
    the image of love only causes more pain.

    Guided by the vision of love,
    picture perfect on a movie screen,
    we allow ourselves to become misguided.
    In reality, how do we know what love is?
    Does true love even exist?

    The search never ends.
    The question always in our hearts.
    It drives us to live out each day,
    yet can cause some to do the unthinkable.
    What will you do to find the truth about love?




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      hmm, i suppose this-- love has many forms. romantic hearts are easily broken. sometimes when they break it's best not to pick up all the pieces, instead find a way to reconstruct it. but yes this stuff does all happen, but i suppose if love only hurts don't give up on helpful forms of love, instead change loves definition.
    | Posted on 2015-01-21 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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