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    dots Submission Name: Where I Want to Bedots
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    Author: riverrei
    ASL Info:    25/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 64/34/61
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWhere I Want to Bedots
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    Green trees running by,
    a beautiful scenery.
    Green grass growing long and thick.
    This is where I want to be.

    A feeling of happiness flows through me,
    I’m finally able to relax, I’m content.
    Spending time with the people who matter most,
    this is where I’m meant to be.

    Resting silently, waiting to get home.
    Home is with them and nature.
    Gentle sounds of noiseless chatter
    makes the trip even more enjoyable.

    Green all around, beautiful and free.
    The smell of campfire filling the air.
    Nothing better than being happy.
    This is where I want to be.




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