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    dots Submission Name: Kickin up Dirtdots
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    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 337/331/94
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsKickin up Dirtdots
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    Life is unsettled,
    and the dust of it still suffocates the air.

    To be in its disturbance
    is more of a complication
    than I have the endurance for...

    Yet here I stand.
    Dust in my eyes,
    and still remaining
    face forward.

    This is a lesson of life.
    to be in its turbulence
    and still find your footing,
    it's what makes us better.

    Let this not be a crutch for the future,
    but a new badge
    that you have earned
    by walking through the fire
    and becoming better because of it.

    Im learning strength,
    as well as finding my power.
    and next time I'll wear goggles in the sandstorm.



    Denise




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      You know -

    whether teacher
    or minister
    or mentor
    or examplar
    or disciple
    or mother
    or father
    or friend

    engaged in the race
    and sweating with a vengeance
    as energy dissipates
    and muscles grow as weary
    as minds craving sleep

    over and over
    the thoughts intertwine
    sane people don't do this
    and yet here am I


    Just some thoughts on your thoughts.
    | Posted on 2015-01-11 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Loved it…That’s kind of spirit we need if we wants to survive… carry on...

    -The nocturnal
    | Posted on 2015-01-07 00:00:00 | by Thenocturnal | [ Reply to This ]


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