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Submission Name: Kickin up Dirt dots

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Author:	Forgiven
ASL Info:	38/F/Florida
Elite Ratio:	3.8 - 337/334/97
Words:	119

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Kickin up Dirt dots

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Life is unsettled,
and the dust of it still suffocates the air.

To be in its disturbance
is more of a complication
than I have the endurance for...

Yet here I stand.
Dust in my eyes,
and still remaining
face forward.

This is a lesson of life.
to be in its turbulence
and still find your footing,
it's what makes us better.

Let this not be a crutch for the future,
but a new badge
that you have earned
by walking through the fire
and becoming better because of it.

Im learning strength,
as well as finding my power.
and next time I'll wear goggles in the sandstorm.

Denise

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You know -

whether teacher
or minister
or mentor
or examplar
or disciple
or mother
or father
or friend

engaged in the race
and sweating with a vengeance
as energy dissipates
and muscles grow as weary
as minds craving sleep

over and over
the thoughts intertwine
sane people don't do this
and yet here am I

Just some thoughts on your thoughts.
| Posted on 2015-01-11 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
Loved it…That’s kind of spirit we need if we wants to survive… carry on...

-The nocturnal
| Posted on 2015-01-07 00:00:00 | by Thenocturnal | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.