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Living Dead


Author: Thenocturnal
ASL Info:    24 / Male / Darkness
Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 4 /4 /4
Words: 173
Class/Type: Lyrics /Depressed
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Living Dead



Can’t you feel the blood around all over?
Or else you are just another piece of meat…
Can’t you see the Lights are fading with pain?
Or else you are another numb; just like me….

There is some cocaine running through my vein
And all my dreams are fading away…
I'm so pricked, even though I can’t feel anything right now…

There is a cigar sleeping behind me, she is not breathing…
And all I want to do is light her up
But I can’t make it to her…
Can anybody help me to bring her back?
But, I know no one would…
Since people let me know they mind, however, they don’t keep their word…

There is some cocaine running through my vein
And all my dreams are fading away…
I'm wounded, and there is some blood around me…

So, I quit… Yeah, I'm done...
But I’m not bleeding inside…
I’m tired of fading… So, I finally give up…

Fuck me, I can’t feel anything right now…




Submitted on 2015-01-07 17:34:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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