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    dots Submission Name: Merry fuck you santadots
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    Author: distortedcloud
    ASL Info:    25/M/London
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 6/8/7
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Comedy
    Total Views: 1561
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 412



    Description:
       festive nonsense


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    dotsMerry fuck you santadots
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    Codeine and dark rum shots
    severed arms from my last victim,
    jacking me off.
    Stomach acid in my spit,
    eradicating silicone expanding tits.
    The faces of pricks takes form in my shit,
    ripping out Barbies blonde ass hair
    while I make her do the splits.
    I am satans gift to the kids,
    father christmas gave me coal
    so I gave his wife my dick.




    Submitted on 2015-01-10 14:50:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very festive. Not the usual genre I read, but definitely had an interesting connotation behind your writing.
    | Posted on 2015-01-12 00:00:00 | by riverrei | [ Reply to This ]


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