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Penmanship Practice

Author: annie0888
ASL Info:    49/f/LA
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Penmanship Practice

Penmanship Practice

What I wouldn't give 
for the clear communication
of a woman in mahogany pumps
to a nine year old boy holding 
a sharpened Ticonderoga
voice like warm milk
push up, pull down, dip below
It's no wonder I live to please 
any woman wearing glasses 
tethered to a rhinestone chain
Lean forward, glide across
the page. Oh, let me make 
just enough of a mistake
prompt her to stand behind me
honey scent circling my giddy head
Let her place a hand on my wrist
guide my hand, hump-hump-hump 
for m.  Touch-touch for w
Slanting, always slanting
gently toward the light.

Submitted on 2015-01-11 05:17:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  So you have hidden teacher fantasies or a need to subjugate? Lol overall nicely written although I don't believe most first graders sre having these fantasies at least I hope not. Talk about problems for the poor Many everyday things can be very sensual though
| Posted on 2015-01-22 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
  That turned me on a bit, haha. Very well written, I definitely sensed the arousal and lust between the lines. I liked it a lot.
| Posted on 2015-01-12 00:00:00 | by riverrei | [ Reply to This ]

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