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    dots Submission Name: Two Nations on a Table-topdots
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    Author: MadGeologist
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    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
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    dotsTwo Nations on a Table-topdots
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    On my desktop sway two flags
    lazily in the winter breeze:

    the taller is Russia,
    standing proud on a sculpted shaft,
    Siberian snow straddling both
    democracy and socialism,
    and reaching out for the sky.

    The shorter, bent,
    rising from a pen-holder
    beside a headless knight
    is a sellotaped Iran,
    proclaiming the Almighty's glory
    twenty-two times over faith and blood.




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