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    dots Submission Name: The Pursuit of Divine Lovedots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 262/106/50
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    dotsThe Pursuit of Divine Lovedots
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    A blind faith for justice.
    A strength in poignant times.
    Unwavering confidence in His command.
    Keeping good thoughts and keeping away from the evils of mind.
    Sustaining purity in this filthy world.
    Following the laws of nature set by the ingenious Creator.
    Listening to the inner voice.
    Connecting with Him
    and living the relationship with Him every moment
    is a pursuit of Divine Love.




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      I like this. I'm not much for religion, but I like the idea of looking to oneself and the inner beauty to find love instead of looking for it in other people or in a relationship. Well written :)
    | Posted on 2015-01-26 00:00:00 | by riverrei | [ Reply to This ]
      Although I'm pretty much agnostic I agree with most of this on the level of religious tenet. Conversely this world is not filthy, it's incredibly beautiful beyond comprehension. Then again it is becoming pretty polluted in human terms, both actually as well as spiritually. For me I seek divine love in romance. We allude to it whenever we interact and especially when lovemaking. How I wish the human race made better harmony together.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-01-22 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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