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    dots Submission Name: A Life Well Liveddots

    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 335/330/93
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Misc
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    dotsA Life Well Liveddots

    Emotions change a reality
    Color the picture
    put events into a new light.

    A new world to walk in,
    and everything is now alternated.
    Even though it is still equivalent to what is was
    and what is always has been.

    Ive climbed into its "boat"
    and passed my rapids,
    Now Im am able to remove my life jacket.

    For a moment I stare into the atmosphere
    with the admiration for the clouds
    and the allure of the sky..

    I will live in these moments
    whether it be for its months
    or years.

    Life is experiences..
    Live them,
    Learn them.

    Dont ever let the juncture
    be at your impasse
    without jumping to the train.

    Dont be fearful of the fall.
    Know you did what you felt,
    lived in your moments..

    and have nothing left to regret.


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      I really like this. I'm not all that great at commenting on anyone's work. I can hardly hold a simple conversation. But I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading this. :)
    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2015-02-17 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]
      Regrets suck! And sometimes we regret things before we look at the bigger picture of where that life event led us. I just commented to another post that the road to happiness is never completely smooth. I don't think we could appreciate it if it were.
    Just my thoughts today.
    | Posted on 2015-02-06 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]

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