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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
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    This life is praise worthy,
    I have found peace in the details, the in between moments of silence, and yes the monotony
    I have gathered secrets that may as well be billboards regardless of the fact that I or anyone else actually sees anything but another ad for another agenda and so we block it out as if it were not a giant obvious sign

    The answer was there, hidden
    Blatant truth disguised by my decision to perceive it as another avenue to satisfy another cause that I just refused to see
    And yet in this point of facade,
    I am the cliché

    I am yet another barefoot child trying to represent some thing genuine and genuinely missing the only thing that is real,
    Its not grand or elaborate or unique save my hearts rare delight in something that once was so overstated, and now thanks to revelation whose origin is a mystery I now find the cause a substantial use of my time




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      "The answer was there, hidden
    Blatant truth disguised by my decision to perceive it as another avenue to satisfy another cause that I just refused to see
    And yet in this point of facade,
    I am the cliché"

    or perhaps the grand scheme of things
    is the false manifesto, the realization
    that there are no grand schemes
    no petty dreams to keep
    pretty heads awake at night
    no dreams without the realization
    dreams have teeth
    that nip at heels like tiny dogs
    with the bravado of lions
    as they taunt gazelle
    we are often not angelic, true
    but we are also too self-aware
    to march like lemmings into the mouth of hell...

    Just my thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2015-02-07 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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