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    dots Submission Name: Alightdots
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    Author: Queen_of_spades
    ASL Info:    21/F/Nocturne
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 95/166/107
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAlightdots
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    There is nothing else like this
    I am free to the core of my being

    light
    air
    transparent
    drifting
    dreaming

    alight with possibility

    I am simply a complete and endless infinity

    There is nothing left to desire

    than my aching craving
    to share every bit with

    you




    Submitted on 2015-02-05 05:56:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this. I haven't read anything with this sort of format so I was a little skittish to read it but I enjoyed it very much. I can definitely relate to that feeling of being free and yet wanting to share everything with someone. It's almost like you've lost that freedom because you desire so much to be around and share everything with this person that you're tied to the hip. The pull this person has can make you feel free which is always a wonderful feeling. I'm having issues explaining my thoughts this morning lol.

    Overall I liked this piece a lot and look forward to reading more by you :)
    | Posted on 2015-02-16 00:00:00 | by riverrei | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah yes, there is a lot to be said for a thorough understanding of self, to feel complete as an individual, but I agree this still leaves us feeling incomplete, we want a partner with which to share. Indeed, paradoxically so!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2015-02-05 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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