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    dots Submission Name: The Silence Inside The Noisedots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Silence Inside The Noisedots
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    I won't give up
    I won't give in
    I won't stay down
    I'll pick myself up off the ground
    And I will fight another day
    Even when the whole world
    Takes my strength away

    When the darkness comes
    The way I feel inside
    Is like a thousand silent voices
    Screaming out in the night
    And when the sun comes up
    There's still no relief
    It's just the same old silence
    The silence inside the noise
    Screaming for the pain
    Screaming for the loneliness
    Screaming for the hate
    Screaming for the fear
    Screaming for the sadness
    Screaming for the anger
    Screaming for the silence
    The silence inside the noise
    It's what I've become




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